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[Adapted from "Writing an Effective Appeal or Request Letter," by Frances Bauer, Ombuds at the University of Western Ontario. Used with permission.]
Writing a letter of appeal to challenge a grade or a letter of complaint about services received in a particular office can be a daunting task. Don't let yourself be overwhelmed with the thought of constructing such a letter, simply follow a couple of guidelines in drafting an appeal or complaint.
THINGS
TO INCLUDE:
Let the recipient know straight away
who you are and what you are writing about.
Use a letterhead format with your full
name, student ID number, mailing address, and telephone number. This makes
it easy for administrators to get in touch with you.
Remember to provide pertinent information
such as the quarter the class was taken in, the course number, and the
instructor's name, or the date of the incident, the place where it occurred,
and identify any person[s] involved.
Include any documentation required by
policy or needed to substantiate your claims.
STICK
TO THE FACTS:
Aim for a one page letter, two at the
very most.
Information should have a direct bearing
on the matter you are appealing or complaining about.
Explain why you are making the appeal
or complaint, attempt to persuade your audience while remaining truthful
and as objective as possible.
CLOSURE:
Indicate a follow-up date on your part,
for instance, "I'll phone your office on Monday the 12th, so you have the
opportunity to review the situation", or let the person[s] know that you
are looking forward to their reply.
Thank the faculty or staff member for
their time and their attention to the matter.
Keep copies of all letters sent or received,
as well as relevant documents and forms.
THE
OMBUDS
OFFICE
CAN HELP
Ombuds Office
169 Cramer Hall
503-725-5901
